Week 4 Reflection: RISE Peer Feedback

Reflect: I related to your story for the simple fact it seemed like you felt restrained creatively at your previous college. This was also my case when I initially began college out of high school. It ultimately led me to take a "break" from school. I like how your work speaks volumes for your passion into photography. 

Inquire: When did you begin taking photos? What were the challenges you faced as you began your photo journey? Do you ever see your photography evolving into a bigger platform of video?

Suggest: I would suggest that you try to incorporate background music to your video. You could hear dead air between your words and pauses mid sentence. I would also suggest trying to use transition effects between your photos to make the video easier to watch.

Elevate: Perhaps you could expand your story by elaborating on what your previous college could not offer or do for you career wise. Expand on how Full Sail is helping you achieve these new creative goals. All in all I thought your video was great!