Video Portrait Project Revision

After careful consideration of the final cut, the three main things I changed were as follows. I took out the fairy spot dust in every shot. I chose to include this effect in the first and final shot. Secondly I lowered the volume of the instrumental. My thought behind this is, the feedback received said the beat seemed to not fit. While I didn't agree with this assessment I did decide the volume being too high might cause this concern. Lastly I shortened a few of the clips to get within the one minute time frame. The first cut was 2 seconds over in length.

Before

After

To notice the difference please look at the upper right hand side within the effects box.

Final Revision

Aaron Collins Self Portrait Peer Review

Aaron Collins Self Portrait

To follow the theme of your fact paced hectic lifestyle here is my review for your video in two paragraphs!

I really enjoyed your music. The instrumental really dictated the hectic frenzy you were trying to convey. With that being said, I would suggest using more camera angles. I understand this would require you to reshoot the whole video as well as re-edit. With time constraints and us coming to the end in the class I know this is close to impossible but just a suggestion for future projects. I feel like your video would have been very fun to watch had the video made quick cuts to different angles. Also I would suggest at the end maybe giving  a grin or some kind of face to express how exhausted you are from the fact paced lifestyle. 

I liked how you managed to speed the clips in the beginning. I thought the editing of those first few clips were executed very well. Overall I enjoyed your video and really look forward to seeing your final revision. Great work sir!